Request from 007fluttershyizardby ~strawbellycake

Digital Art / Vector / Animals

This one was a reuqest from ~007fluttershyizard

If you spot any errors please tell me so i can fix them ^^

_{oh the shame}

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Demigod Zaki belongs to ~007fluttershyizard
Artwork by me/~strawbellycake

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~naiaden Dec 23, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I really hope I don't upset you in any way, but here are some errors I found: [link]

1. You should increase the miter limit for the horns and hair, so that they are sharp. Or, you can convert the strokes to paths and edit them that way.
2. The ear is not complete, it should go all the way down over the hair outline.
3. The hair outline should go under the ear.
4. Minor error, the hair outline should cover the lighter-green hair path.
5. The lines aren't smooth, you might want to tweak them slightly.
6. Same with #4, blue eye path leaks past the green face outline.
7. The nose outline should "cover" the eye - i.e. you might want to move the nose path slightly to the right.
8. Slight leak.
9. The shoe isn't completely on.
10. Should the hair continue past the horn?

And as a general tip: try to use as few nodes as possible, that way the lines stay much more smooth without additional tweaking. The tail and wings have some sharp turns, that I didn't mark with #5.

And good work anyways, despite these small errors. I'm sorry if I seem rude or anything like that, I definitely don't mean to be.